This week in lockdown I wrote a persuasive writing piece about why we should ban junkfood from schools. I hope you like it. Comment if you agree with me
Why we should ban junk food from school
I am Romeo and I will try to convince you to ban junk food from schools.
Parents, do you want your kids to come home energized just by sugar? I bet you don’t and that's why it's a good idea to ban junk food from school. I'm not talking completely banning junk food, but just limiting it to 1-2 treats. If you find a big juicy hamburger in your lunch box and other kids don't get what you have, it could lead to jealousy, and jealousy could lead to begging.
If you do get your kids junk food they could get addicted and it could lead to even more begging if you don’t get it. A lot of money could be spent on less expensive healthy food but it's all getting spent on junk food.
It could also lead to anger if you take it away. Also for schools if they have a cafeteria, they may spend more money on junk food then healthy food. It could lead to arguments if the kids want more junk food and there isn't any left from kids sloping mountains of it on their plate. For the school, once the healthy food has gone rotten they would be wasting their money on healthy food when all kids want is junk food.
Hi Romeo
ReplyDeleteThanks for posting your persuasive writing. I absolutely agree with you and think that all junk food in schools should be banned. I think fruit, vegetables and whole foods are much better for children's learning. I really like the way that you have used a rhetorical question to start your piece of writing. Well done! What is your favourite item to have in your lunch?
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ReplyDeleteHi Romeo,
ReplyDeleteYes junk food should be banned!You have persuaded me with your writing.I definitely agree with you. What is your favourite time of day?
Nia