This week for reading I have done a acrostic poem about my hobby. If your wondering my hobby is Hockey.Hope you like it :)
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This week for reading I have done a acrostic poem about my hobby. If your wondering my hobby is Hockey.Hope you like it :)
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i like your work i think you should add more color and change the font but i think it is great
ReplyDeleteI think this is great I love the background color it makes it stand out! and the way you describe your hobby is awsome! good job Romeo.
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