Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 1, 2020
Bike ride
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Xin chao Romeo, I really like the fact that you used a good context for your blog post, and plus I do really like going on bike rides on the road, to get home, et cetera. One thing you could add though, is a few pictures/ drawings and an attractive title.
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Sophie N.
Hi Romeo - That sounds like you had a really good time at Burwood Forest. I don't currently have a bike but when I did have one I enjoyed biking through the forest with my boys.
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